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Monday, 10 September 2018
Title
of Book: The Brotherhood
Series:
1 of 2
Genre:
Psychological Thriller
Release Date: 25-Jul-2018 (ebook), 20-May-2018 (paperback)
Publisher: Crooked Cat Books
Publisher: Crooked Cat Books
When a young woman becomes pregnant
in a religious sect, how far will she go to escape the abusive leader and save
the people she loves?
The Brotherhood – safe haven or prison?
After her parents’ sudden death, a grieving
Melissa falls back on her faith and into the welcoming arms of a religious
sect. Captivated by their leader, Dominic, she leaves her old life behind and
moves to the countryside to join them.
But life in The Brotherhood is not as safe as
it first appeared. When engineer Mark joins The Brotherhood, Melissa finds
herself conflicted between her growing feelings for him and her crush on
Dominic. With their leader's initial encouragement, Melissa and Mark grow
close.
But as her haven becomes a prison, Melissa's
newfound happiness is destroyed by Dominic’s jealousy. How can she escape and
save the ones she loves?
EXTRACT
“My
children, good morning. Welcome to this assembly. I wondered how to make
this
anniversary into a very special occasion. So, when the local parish
priest approached me last
week, and asked if I could help a young man in his care,
this seemed to be the answer. This
young man, Trevor, was recently
blinded in a fire. He is suffering physically and emotionally. I
consulted with the Almighty
Lord, and he decreed I should help this poor fellow. What better day
to choose
for a miracle than this: the first anniversary of our Lord’s visitation? Before I bring him in, we should prepare ourselves
and ask for the Lord’s
help with this difficult but worthwhile
task.”
He signals
to the pianist and she plays some opening bars. I don’t recognise the music. My heart’s racing
again and my mouth is dry. Where’s the water
fountain when it’s needed?
“The Abbey Prayer,” Brie whispers in my ear.
Everyone is joining in around me, but I don’t know the words. There’s a chorus after every ten lines or so, and after a few repetitions I’m able to sing a few lines here and there. There’s
a thrill in the air. Anticipation sparks around me.
I can’t believe
I’m about to witness a miracle. Will he actually be able to cure this man
Trevor? Surely it’s not real. But then, Dominic’s supposedly the Messiah. Everyone
here believes it. Maybe
it is real.
The thought is interrupted by a small voice at the back of my head: He can’t bring Mum and
Dad back though. What use is a miracle if he can’t do that? A lump forms immediately in my
throat. I swallow it impatiently. There’s another
chorus, so I try to join in again, but my throat is
too full. The song ends, and I
focus on the activity at the front.
A bulky man in a grey uniform comes forward. There are several
men in grey standing around the edge of the Chapel. Dominic
whispers to the stocky grey man, who then leaves the Chapel. He returns a moment later, leading a short man in his mid-twenties. As he gets closer, I gasp. I
can’t help it. His face
is covered in scars. They’re
red and inflamed. The fire must have damaged more than just his eyesight.
A shudder runs through me. My face tingles
as I imagine the pain he must be enduring.
Please let Dominic help him. Please don’t let it be a sham. Please let Dominic really be the Messiah. I can feel doubt running through
me, and do my best to exude positivity and belief – in
case it helps.
Trevor stands close to the lectern. I try to see his expression, but my view of his face is blocked by a tall woman in front. Tina shifts, and pulls me across to get a better view. We aren’t precisely out of line, but it’s an improvement.
I glance again at our visitor. Sweat glistens on the right side of his forehead;
the only normal patch of skin on his face. The room’s hot. It’s only May, but temperatures are soaring into the
nineties. I don’t think he’s sweating
from the heat though.
“My dear young man,” Dominic addresses Trevor, his voice gentle, yet loud enough
to be heard at the back of the room. “I have prayed for guidance
so I can understand the best way to
help you. I believe you are
blind and in pain. Is that
correct?”
“Yes sir.” Trevor’s voice
sounds thin and feeble.
Perhaps it reflects
his state of mind.
Dominic rests a hand on Trevor’s shoulder. The young man winces. How far does the scarring extend?
“In order to help you, I need to call on the services
of The Brotherhood.” He raises his voice
slightly and turns his face to us. “My children,
I must ask you to sing. Please raise your voices
and embrace the beautiful and apt hymn, O
What a Miracle, My Lord.”
When Melissa is at her most vulnerable, after her parents die, she is befriended by the charasmatic Dominic, she is relieved to have someone to confide in about the stress she is under, particularly from an ex boyfriend who appears to be stalking her. She feels very alone in the world and Dominic is the only person she feels safe with. When he suggests that she join his religious sect in an old Abbey it seems like the perfect solution. Her ex will never find her there. She'd be safe at last. However, The Brotherhood is not the safe haven she had hoped it would be. It seems there's more to fear inside The Brotherhood that outside in the real world.
What a roller coaster of a book! I was exhausted by the time I got to the end of it! I loved Jo Fenton's writing style and the writing gripped me from page one. I've always been interested in what draws people to religious groups and religion of any sort. Dominic it seems chooses people when they are at their most vulnerable and probably not in a position to make the best life choices. He feeds on their fears and this cult, which is what it is, is there to serve his ego more than anything else. Driven by fear, his 'followers' are brainwashed into believing he is something he isn't. He is the master manipulator using charm to draw people into his dark world.
The novel is beautifully paced and a desperate desire to find out more about Melissa's story, drives the read to read it at breakneck speed. I just needed to know what was going to happen. Told in the first person, we learn first hand what Melissa is feeling and throughout the course of the novel her fear is palpable. Just how far people go to believe something smacks for me, of something all too real and that's what made this story so compelling. I loved this book. A brilliant piece of writing and a recommended read from me if you want a book to get your heart racing!
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Jo Fenton grew up in Hertfordshire. She
devoured books from an early age, particularly enjoying adventure books, school
stories and fantasy. She wanted to be a scientist from aged six after being
given a wonderful book titled “Science Can Be Fun”. At eleven, she discovered
Agatha Christie and Georgette Heyer, and now has an eclectic and much loved
book collection cluttering her home office.
Jo combines an exciting career in Clinical
Research with an equally exciting but very different career as a writer of psychological
thrillers.
When not working, she runs (very slowly), and
chats to lots of people. She lives in Manchester with her husband, two sons, a
Corgi and a tankful of tropical fish. She is an active and enthusiastic member
of two writing groups and a reading group.
Twitter: https://twitter.com/jl_fenton
Goodreads Author Page: https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/17984435.Jo_Fenton
Blog: https://jofenton137.com/
Website: https://jofenton137.com/
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